AFerrari08's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lernin 2 Anim8]

The boil is a nice touch and it's a good effort for your first animation :)

Fishpaw responds:

Thanks a lot!!!

[Feeling DBZ (Pilot) 2]

It felt like it was building up to something nice, but I started to lose interest towards the end when it was just talking. I know in the comments it says that there is still more coming etc, so it can be a bit hard to judge if it isn't the full thing.
To improve the end of this one, possibly cut to some reaction shots of the guy watching. Hope this helps :)

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanksfor the suggestion and i actually doing that, zoom in the tv and forget the guy in the sofa. i kinda of like it. everythingbis more easy with a pen display.