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AFerrari08

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The boil is a nice touch and it's a good effort for your first animation :)

Fishpaw responds:

Thanks a lot!!!

It felt like it was building up to something nice, but I started to lose interest towards the end when it was just talking. I know in the comments it says that there is still more coming etc, so it can be a bit hard to judge if it isn't the full thing.
To improve the end of this one, possibly cut to some reaction shots of the guy watching. Hope this helps :)

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanksfor the suggestion and i actually doing that, zoom in the tv and forget the guy in the sofa. i kinda of like it. everythingbis more easy with a pen display.

I liked what was there but I think I would've liked it more if there was a bit more context. It would've been nice to see what he was like during the date.
Overall, it's good, but needs more to make it great :)

Very nice visuals and animation. Liquid can be hard to animate but you've done well. Sound would've made it better however it does say Experimental so that's understandable.

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